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Basics

Name: Merin Chiori [My Rin] [Chi o ree]
True Age: 648
Gender: Female
Personality:
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General Appearance
Appearance:
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Appearance Age: 17
Height: 5'0
Weight: 85 lbs


Natural  Abilities

Unreleased Abilities:
- Personality Switch: It isn't much of an ability as something that can occur. Her silent personality when under certain stresses turns off and her Inner Hollow influenced personality comes out. A cruel and vile personality which is more likely to initiate violence and other issues.

- Hakuda: Hakuda (白打, White Hits) is a close-combat style of fighting, in which one is unarmed and uses only one's body, and is one of the four basic fighting styles of the Shinigami. As all members of the Stealth Force, Merin was trained in this art, but she took it a bit further as it was her favorite of the arts and served well with her Shikai.

- Shunkō: Shunkō (瞬閧, Flash Cry) is an advanced battle technique which combines the physical techniques of Hakuda with the spell-based techniques of Kidō. One of the very few Kidō skills Chiori knows. Shunkō is the highest form of Hakuda technique. It comes in element of wind when used by Chiori. It is an ultra-powerful technique in which one drives Kidō into one's arms and legs. Other users can control it to the degree to use it as a weapon. This is not true with Merin. She uses it as a current to take enemies off their balance and increase the speed and range of her needles. The vortex like form of Shunkō used by Merin allows for a constant current for longer periods of use. When in a hand-to-hand combat situation, when others attempt to block or attack Merin the current of wind with move their limbs with it, making it extremely difficult to actually block or hit at all. In the case of her needles she blasts the Shunkō as she shoots out the needles to increase the speed and range.

Zanpakutō:
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Zanpakutō Release Phrase: Holding the Zanpakutō between her two forearms, it glows a bright yellow color, and transforms, wrapping around her two lower arm portions. The exact command is: "Let me see your slender and swift skills,  Dokuchō"


Zanpakutō Spirit

Zanpakutō Spirit Name: Dokuchō
Zanpakutō Spirit Appearance:
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Zanpakutō Spirit Personality:

Dokuchō is very much a child. She looks to be at least 12, but acts about 5. She speaks in 3rd person and refers to herself as Doku-Doku. She has the attention span of all that of 5 seconds. The only thing she seems to be able to focus on is speed. She flashes from 1 spot to the next, flying at great speeds. She is bubbly and full of laughter. She is very much Merin's opposite. Because of this the 2 are often at odds. It is more 1 sided, however. Doku would love to love on Merin, buuut Merin is NOT a fan of contact or extended conversation. Doku wants to mother Merin, which Merin just couldn't imagine taking seriously, as Doku acts like the child, and Merin is very mature. It would seem the only time she can be serious is when discussions of Merin's Inner Hollow comes about. Merin actually has a trust in the Hollow, which is not safe and Doku knows it. As all Zanpakutō, Doku just wants to protect her owner.

Zanpakutō Spirit's World:
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~ Poison Information~

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Shikai:
Shikai Appearance: ~This is a rough image to start out the idea. Read below for full details~
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Attached at both forearms are braces of Zanpakutō material. The holsters carry up to 6 needles at a time, each. However, this doesn't mean that is a total number of needles she can create. She can potentially make more, as the failed needles make contact to something. They will then dematerialize the spirit particles and re materialize into her holster.  The brace also covers the opposite side of the arm for protection, and are of Zanpakutō material, for the purpose of blocking attacks.
The needles are made of Zanpakutō material like the actual braces themselves. The needles are 7 inches in length. they only have .3 inch width, descending to .003 inch at the tiny tips, to easily pierce the harshest of skins. The holster and needles are black in color. the tips with go into the skin and break on impact, making it more painful to pull out as well as releasing the the poison that is inside the needle into the prey.
The brace starts at the elbow. A point goes past on the underside, giving extra protection and a way to possibly do damage to others. the point lines up against the upper arm of Merin when the arm is at full extension. On the upper side of the forearm the holster starts after the pit between upper and lower section of the arm. The brace goes to the wrist on the underside, and covers the knuckles on the upper, to protect and cause increased damage in case of a punch or just more skin to cover for protection.  

Shikai Abilities:

Poison Needles Taking Flight
Whenever Merin wills it needles will shoot out of their holsters. She can either take a straight shot or if she swings her arms as the needles are released they will shoot in the direction her arm is as the needle is released. They are not heat or Spirit Pressure seeking. They have a range of 100 M

Because of it's simplicity it is a 1 turn moved with a 2 post cool down.

Hand to Hand Claws
The needles extend out just past the tips of her fingers for open hand moves, and between the fingers 5 inches during closed fist combat. The goal is slight increased damage and infection of the enemy. The needles can be switched back to the use of Poison Needles Taking Flight, as long as it is within the 3 turn limit, and after it is done, the cool down begins, as it would if she was only using Poison Needles Taking Flight.

3 turn use, 5 turn cool down

Needle Storm
Spinning rapidly in a circle needles shoot out from 360 degrees with a range of 50 M. If you take cover you should be safe, as long as what you hide behind is thick and you aren't leaning against it. during this move Merin has only slight visibility and highly relies on the ability to sense the presence of the enemy based on Spirit Pressure.

1 turn use, 3 turn cool down

Bankai
~ to be created at a later date~
Bankai:
Bankai Appearance:
Bankai Abilities:

Vizard Abilities

Inner Hollow Appearance:
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Inner Hollow Personality: Chiori's Hollow is very much a predator. He preys on the weakness he has instilled into Merin. The fear of being alone again. Without his voice, she would be alone. She had no real friends in all her many years of existing, until he came along. At least, she thinks of him as a friend. because of this he has whittled a second personality, in which he partially takes control of her body and mind. Part of her still exists, but it is very weak, and he is very different from her.
He likes to toy with minds and strike cruel low blows. He will use the fact she is a child and a female while in control to do whatever he wants and to get whatever he wants. Over all he is an embodiment of Satan.
Hollow Mask Appearance:
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Vizard Abilities:

The Average things: Increased speed (Called Sonido), Spirit Pressure, Reiryoku, endurance. Obviously facial protective gear.

Quick Fire Bala: Bala with her Spirit pressure Color. A deep crimson red. The fire rate is 3 bala per second. She can only use this for 4 continuous seconds.

2 turn use 3 turn cool down

Past & Roleplay Sample

Character Background:
Human Life:
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Rukongai & The Academy
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Shinigami Life:
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Up to Current:

As of now Merin lives in the Human world, battling what was inside her. And learning more about the gift at her end of the bargain. Her Hollow Mask and Hollow abilities. As time passed there was a name for things like her. They became known as Vizards. She saw a group from time to time, but really she was too ashamed to speak to them. Most Vizards defeated the thing inside of them, silencing the voice and getting control back over their own lives. She hadn't done this. She was too weak. She travels the world battling the forces of Hollows to atone for all she had done without her knowledge, and simply exists.



Roleplay Sample:

Merin wondered beneath the dimly lit streets of Kyoto, traveling to Osaka. She loved staying in the traditional community of Kyoto, and seeing all the beautiful Geisha and Geisha related trades. There, she owns a dark abandon looking warehouse. Once a month she would take the travels from Kyoto to Osaka to visit her favorite Ramen stand. Over her many years of existence she has found that the simple crappy looking stands make much better Ramen than the big fancy building homed ones. Plus, there is much less question of ethics at a Ramen stand. A young girl walking from who knows where to eat alone in the middle of the night causes questions in restaurants. Worry of abuse or neglect causes humans to approach her and ask where she is from and all this other drama Merin would rather avoid all together.

Sure, there were a few good places in Kyoto to eat some quality Ramen while watching the beautiful Geisha and Maiko walk by in their elegant kimono, but it's nice to treat yourself every once and a while. The walk in the silent streets was refreshing, and Merin enjoyed the venture.

The city grew before her as she met the limits. Bright neon signs, bustling streets, and the occasional drug induced human filled her surroundings. Merin walked the sidewalk until she reached the familiar place of Mako's Noodles. A wooden stand blocking a dirty alleyway, with old crumbling paper signs on it, a few rickety only bar stools, and a happy old fat man serving his life's work by the bowl full. Two sailors using the food to sober up sat and chatted about old sea stories. Luckily they took end seats, so Merin could have at least 2 seats away from them.

Merin's stomach lightly rumbled. It was a bit of a journey and her body knew that where she was headed meant glorious food. She gently cleared her throat. Ahem. A simple gesture to let Mako know one of his shy regulars was there.

The owner was an older man of around 50, with lightly blading black hair. He had wrinkles in his eyes from all the smiles he gives, and he had a thick, but clean mustache. He was easily 300 plus pounds of a mix between muscle and enjoying his own cooking. He was stout at maybe 5 foot 6, but his kindness kept roughians away. He was known for his love of others and feeding the poor, and was often offered jobs in larger establishments as a chef, but he always declined. He loved his little shop and his helping of others while hearing their wonderful stories and all of the praise he heard first hand.

Mako leaned on the counter and looked down at his little guest. The usual, then? He said with a twinkle in his eyes, and a kind hearted smile. Merin only looked up with her big eyes and nodded.

The words of Mako caught the attention of the others at the Ramen stand. The looked over at this cute possible high school student. They put on drunken smiles and considered making a move. the larger of the 2 offered to buy her meal, and Mako laughed a deep loud laughter. Ok. He began. That'll be 5573.68 yen. ($56)

The sailor spit up some of his noodles and coughed heavily. What could this little girl order that was so expensive?! Here you are, Merin. Mako places an extra extra large bowl of lobster and steak Ramen in front of the girl. She was then handed a pair of chopsticks that she swiftly cracked open and tilted the bowl towards herself and dug in like a pig. In just moments the bowl was empty, and she places the utensils back into the empty serving dish. In an awkward rush the guys left before being stuck with the bill they offered to pay.

Merin waited to make sure they were gone and smiled up at Mako and bowed in respect. It was the few times she cracked emotions. This old stand and man were very dear to her. She had a connection to him since he was but a child, although he wouldn't know it. She had seen him any time over his years, and even saved him once from a train. He was 19 and drunk, passed out in the wrong place. As any creature with care for the human race she picked him up and dropped him off at a shelter. She was sure he just assumed he passed out there. She paid her tab with much extra, as usual. It helped pay for the many homeless he feeds. He was once homeless, and knows how hard life could be. He had by far earned the Vizard's respect.

Merin hopped off her seat and began the journey back home. She didn't rush or use her abilities to shoot off before anyone could even see. It was nights like this she could almost feel human. She walked the familiar path enjoying the quiet moon filled night.
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Comments/Notes: Well, that reasoning for Shunko would not work at all, however a discussion was had earlier. We determined that for sake of power balance that Vizards can't use Shunko. And as a note, I want you to know that she isn't the first Vizard as it sort-of sounds like. She's an earlier one, but not the first!
Tier: 2-1 once Shunko is removed
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